That moment, the end

That moment
when he smiles,
looks you in the eye,
(with a straight face)
tells you who you are

That moment
when he mistakes
how much you care
what he does
does not

That moment
when you
tell him, but
to smile back

(Your words
will not be heard;
best to preserve
for those
to hear them)

That moment,
the end;
the beginning
of something

  1. September 24, 2014 at 9:25 pm

    Beautiful. Now, I will just peel back your words line by line. Kind of like deeply entwined relationships–there’s always more to be stripped away.

  2. September 24, 2014 at 11:51 pm

    I do get rather a lot of consolation from the thought that every ending is a beginning.

  3. September 25, 2014 at 3:07 am

    I love this, so beautiful. Thank you for sharing this one.

  4. September 25, 2014 at 10:12 am

    Reading the words, I appreciate the poetry. Interpreting the words and what they may mean in your life, makes me sad.

    • September 27, 2014 at 7:13 am

      Please know this is not about me and Anthony, who don’t get much wakeful time together these days but are doing well (somehow) regardless. ♥

  5. September 25, 2014 at 10:42 am

    Lovely, but sad. Hope all is well.

  6. September 25, 2014 at 8:15 pm

    Lovely, bittersweet poem…sending good karma your way, my friend.

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